Death is Only the Beginning
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Re: Death is Only the Beginning
I edited it... and I'll post a new chapter soon.
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Re: Death is Only the Beginning
I re-did the first part....:
A dark gray wolf, called Mace, padded alone through the night on the dark, rocky mountain path that lead to nowhere but more mountain. There was nothing there. Not a hare nor owl stirred. Of course not, she thought, on a night like this! Mace had always been a rather stubborn wolf, and it was partly because of that that she refused to believe that there was nothing else. But the nights were always like that, and there was never mice, or hare, or anything, even in the day. It was just her and the mountain. As she walked, the words Riskdawn had said were ringing in her head like an annoying pup asking to be fed; "Death isn't so bad. Death is only the beginning of life, it's not so bad," she had said. What would she know about death, anyway? Had she lost family? Had she died? No. She had not.
A dark gray wolf, called Mace, padded alone through the night on the dark, rocky mountain path that lead to nowhere but more mountain. There was nothing there. Not a hare nor owl stirred. Of course not, she thought, on a night like this! Mace had always been a rather stubborn wolf, and it was partly because of that that she refused to believe that there was nothing else. But the nights were always like that, and there was never mice, or hare, or anything, even in the day. It was just her and the mountain. As she walked, the words Riskdawn had said were ringing in her head like an annoying pup asking to be fed; "Death isn't so bad. Death is only the beginning of life, it's not so bad," she had said. What would she know about death, anyway? Had she lost family? Had she died? No. She had not.
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